Wikipedia contributions by Ashmoo

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  • Marjane SatrapiEdited 6/4/2026, 9:31:14 AM

    we don't need all 3. it just makes this sentence less clear.

  • Jim Davis (cartoonist)Edited 6/3/2026, 2:23:20 PM
  • Ma Anand SheelaEdited 6/3/2026, 10:37:16 AM

    the conviction is mentioned in the next sentence

  • RajneeshEdited 6/3/2026, 10:32:34 AM

    all NRM are controversial. this word doesn't add anything

  • RajneeshEdited 6/3/2026, 10:31:24 AM

    covered by godman . And he is not notable as a philosopher

  • RajneeshEdited 6/3/2026, 10:30:20 AM
  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:26:02 AM

    /* Reception */ not in source

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:23:43 AM

    /* Literary writing */ without further explanation this means nothing and has no source anyway

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:22:53 AM

    /* Academic career */ sorry, but this is not an appropriate source

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:20:33 AM

    /* Early life */ just state the fact. the cite tag will say were it comes from

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:20:00 AM

    covered by essaying. This sentence is already long enough and doesn't clearly explain which of these he is actually notable for

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:12:09 AM

    /* Personal life */ WP:TITLE. We say his is a rector

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:11:29 AM

    /* Some noted ideas */

  • David Bentley HartEdited 6/3/2026, 9:09:47 AM

    /* Literary writing */ focus on facts, not unverifiable "known for"

  • Lawrence PazderEdited 6/2/2026, 9:55:31 AM

    /* Michelle Remembers and satanic ritual abuse */

  • Lawrence PazderEdited 6/2/2026, 9:51:29 AM

    /* Background */ chrono order

  • Satanic panicEdited 6/2/2026, 9:48:44 AM

    the speed of which scholarly interest built isn't notable enough for the lede (and "slowly" is a value judgement anyway)

  • Satanic panicEdited 6/2/2026, 9:46:19 AM

    we say it is discredited "controversial" adds nothing

  • Turks and Caicos IslandsEdited 5/28/2026, 1:22:56 PM

    /* Crime */

  • The Littlest HoboEdited 5/27/2026, 7:13:43 AM

    weird text. We do not need to explicitly say the people in a fiction TV show are actors.

  • Duncan JonesEdited 5/18/2026, 9:50:03 AM

    /* Personal life */

  • Duncan JonesEdited 5/18/2026, 9:49:28 AM

    /* Personal life */ no need for this level of detail on announcements

  • White House Rose GardenEdited 5/18/2026, 7:53:16 AM

    /* Official and informal use */ no source and written in a way that it is hard to WP:V. (seems like personal opinion)

  • TwenteEdited 5/15/2026, 3:26:20 PM

    /* Traditions */

  • Brock PierceEdited 5/12/2026, 2:23:06 PM

    /* Involvement in Ukraine projects */ no need for source in-text.

  • Brock PierceEdited 5/12/2026, 2:22:10 PM

    /* Involvement in Ukraine projects */ WP:TITLE

  • Brock PierceEdited 5/12/2026, 2:21:06 PM

    /* Personal life */ put topic in 1 para

  • Brock PierceEdited 5/12/2026, 2:16:43 PM

    not needed

  • Hendrik SeyffardtEdited 5/12/2026, 1:53:30 PM

    /* Stolen artwork */ facts not announcements

  • People v. TurnerEdited 5/11/2026, 10:05:00 AM

    /* Unsuccessful appeal */ WP:WEASEL

  • The Unforgiven (1960 film)Edited 5/7/2026, 7:14:15 AM

    /* Production */ no source and wikipedia shouldn't be telling readers what SHOULD be

  • Alan Le MayEdited 5/7/2026, 7:12:48 AM
  • Stephen L. BrusatteEdited 5/6/2026, 3:07:18 PM

    PR term. And how do we WP:Verify 'popular'. best to just state concrete facts

  • Stephen L. BrusatteEdited 5/6/2026, 3:06:35 PM

    pared down PR words

  • Stephen L. BrusatteEdited 5/6/2026, 3:04:44 PM

    make less vague

  • Stephen L. BrusatteEdited 5/6/2026, 3:02:41 PM

    /* Biography */

  • Murder of James BulgerEdited 5/6/2026, 2:10:09 PM

    /* 2019 Oscars controversy */

  • Monticello, New YorkEdited 4/30/2026, 6:24:21 AM

    /* Tourism */ we already say including

  • Rob LiefeldEdited 4/28/2026, 1:53:36 PM

    /* 2000s work */ removed repetition and focus on facts not announcements.

  • Rob LiefeldEdited 4/28/2026, 1:49:19 PM

    /* Leaving Marvel Comics, co-founding Image Comics */

  • Rob LiefeldEdited 4/28/2026, 1:45:49 PM

    /* Early career */ trivia. focus on the current narrative

  • Rob LiefeldEdited 4/28/2026, 1:36:46 PM

    direct speech

  • Louise SimonsonEdited 4/28/2026, 1:24:34 PM

    /* Comics writer */

  • Ned TanenEdited 4/23/2026, 4:36:22 PM

    rewrote weird passive voice

  • Biff TannenEdited 4/23/2026, 4:33:13 PM

    no need for main

  • John StoltenbergEdited 4/21/2026, 12:31:21 PM

    /* Personal life */ strange wording

  • John StoltenbergEdited 4/21/2026, 12:29:19 PM
  • John StoltenbergEdited 4/21/2026, 12:28:59 PM

    lede establishes notability. not everything ever done;

  • Cecily StrongEdited 4/20/2026, 12:51:48 PM

    /* Other work */ no need for announcements after the fact

  • Pepa (rapper)Edited 4/20/2026, 12:10:43 PM

    /* Filmography */

  • Pepa (rapper)Edited 4/20/2026, 12:10:28 PM

    /* Filmography */

  • Pepa (rapper)Edited 4/20/2026, 12:10:05 PM

    /* Personal life */

  • Pepa (rapper)Edited 4/20/2026, 12:08:31 PM

    /* Personal life */

  • Hurby AzorEdited 4/20/2026, 12:07:10 PM
  • Salt (rapper)Edited 4/20/2026, 12:06:01 PM
  • Philip KaufmanEdited 4/18/2026, 12:28:28 PM

    /* Early life and education */

  • Philip KaufmanEdited 4/18/2026, 12:28:03 PM

    /* Early life and education */ chrono

  • Philip KaufmanEdited 4/18/2026, 12:22:38 PM

    /* 1964–1977 */ clean up lang

  • Philip KaufmanEdited 4/18/2026, 12:19:42 PM

    just state the facts.

  • Gerard LeeEdited 4/16/2026, 11:24:42 AM

    /* Death */

  • Gerard LeeEdited 4/16/2026, 11:24:17 AM

    /* Early life & Education */

  • Santa Fe, New MexicoEdited 4/16/2026, 7:37:26 AM

    /* Politics */ we just said this one sentence earlier.

  • Cormac McCarthyEdited 4/16/2026, 7:33:18 AM

    /* Personal life and views */ he was owner at the time

  • Flannery O'ConnorEdited 4/16/2026, 7:21:35 AM

    /* Letters */ no source and what is thing even specifically saying?

  • Killing of Nick BergEdited 4/16/2026, 7:16:03 AM

    /* Arrests and confessions */

  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:25:11 AM

    /* 2010–2013: Mainstream recognition */ clarify what "mainsteam" means. this assumes a pov

  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:22:51 AM

    /* Personal life */

  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:22:31 AM

    /* Personal life */

  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:22:11 AM

    /* Personal life */ facts not announcements

  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:20:09 AM
  • Isla FisherEdited 4/15/2026, 11:19:18 AM

    /* Early life */ chrono

  • William Kininmonth (meteorologist)Edited 4/14/2026, 12:00:03 PM
  • Heaven and Earth (book)Edited 4/14/2026, 11:58:06 AM

    /* Other reactions */ "maverick" is not approp for an encyc

  • Ian PlimerEdited 4/14/2026, 11:53:23 AM

    /* Court case */

  • Ian PlimerEdited 4/14/2026, 11:51:26 AM

    /* Political influence */ not in source

  • Ian PlimerEdited 4/14/2026, 11:49:30 AM

    /* Mining companies */

  • Ian PlimerEdited 4/14/2026, 11:49:02 AM

    /* Mining companies */

  • Ian PlimerEdited 4/14/2026, 11:48:40 AM

    /* Mining companies */

  • Marie OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:47:45 PM

    covered by actor

  • Marie OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:46:09 PM

    /* Personal setbacks and challenges */ WP:WEASEL

  • Marie OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:45:14 PM

    /* Public image */

  • Marie OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:44:45 PM

    /* Writing career */

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:42:18 PM

    /* Musical theater */

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:40:13 PM

    /* Other hosting opportunities */

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:39:43 PM

    historical mode

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:38:01 PM

    main article doesn't support this. "Dancing with the stars" premise is that it is non-dancers competing.

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:30:46 PM

    what does 'successfully' even mean here?

  • Donny OsmondEdited 4/13/2026, 2:29:59 PM
  • Jesus CampEdited 4/13/2026, 9:57:33 AM

    /* Critical reception */

  • Jesus CampEdited 4/13/2026, 9:52:57 AM

    "controversy" means nothing. Make a bit clearer

  • Jack HarlowEdited 4/13/2026, 7:15:12 AM

    /* Acting career */ no need for announcements after the fact

  • Jack HarlowEdited 4/13/2026, 7:13:44 AM
  • John RuskinEdited 4/9/2026, 12:29:16 PM

    /* Note on Ruskin's personal appearance */

  • John RuskinEdited 4/9/2026, 12:27:20 PM

    /* Lectures in the 1860s */

  • Effie GrayEdited 4/9/2026, 12:22:08 PM
  • Songhai peopleEdited 4/8/2026, 2:05:12 PM

    avoid prescriptive lang

  • Matt RidleyEdited 4/8/2026, 7:13:12 AM

    /* COVID-19 */ finish the first thought before commenting on reception

  • Matt RidleyEdited 4/8/2026, 7:11:42 AM

    /* Shale gas and fracking */

  • Matt RidleyEdited 4/8/2026, 7:10:48 AM

    /* Shale gas and fracking */ not really a 'however' situation

  • Matt RidleyEdited 4/8/2026, 7:10:28 AM

    /* Shale gas and fracking */ no source. how would be verify such a vague statement anyway?