Wikipedia contributions by Chaosdruid

added page for recently released film

Redir as avatards was the original series that became dead pixels

translating and converting from German Wikipedia

begin creation

create page - transfer from sandbox 6

first edit

Create article - will be adding more content tonight

/* Early life */ as per BE note

/* History */ prose, reorder, wikify

italicise whole name, fine if not italicised, and reorder for prose

/* Live-action films */ This is not "a film" as it comprises 8 episodes of between 45 and 58 mintues, which would be 360+minutes long, or 6 hours. There may have been a film released in Japanese theatres but the sources are not clear on length.

/* Commercial developments */ prose, combine sentences into para

/* History */ linking AirUK

/* Commercial developments */ "coming years" is in the future from now, "following years" was in the future after the date mentioned (in this case 1971) but in the past from today.

/* History */ prose, refs

/* History */ prose, add ref, expand

/* History */ prose, expand details, connect strangely dislocated sentences, add refs

/* History */ double link, repeated from the previous one, that does not support this sentence as it is just a book title page and does not mention anything in this sentence

/* History */ prose, linking

/* History */ restore correct name, as it was not known as "The Express until later. Combine short sentences

/* top */ replace sentence part after poss. vandalism

Undid revision [[Special:Diff/1344169448|1344169448]] by [[Special:Contributions/~2026-17244-29|~2026-17244-29]] ([[User talk:~2026-17244-29|talk]]) rem erroneous classification as poss. vandalism from poss. repeat offender

/* top */ move to more sensible place in the sentence

/* Career */ tour extension prose

/* Personal life */ ref to post punc as per MOS ... Should only be next to words in mid sentence when fairly contentious

/* Ancient China */ add carthage

/* Topography, layout, and society */ a cothon is a sheltered man-made inland port, not a circular one. The whole port is both the rectangular and circular parts, one being civilian and one military respectively.

/* top */ English map (the original) to replace the French language version

/* top */ ref to post punc as per MOS [[WP:CITEFOOT]]

Restore British English as per article creation prior & at GA

/* Server */ updated as TS 6 is now out there

/* Update mechanism */ and now TS 6

/* Server */ update as TS 6 server is now out

/* Archeology */ both this and other sources state 1,000 NOT 10,000

cr sp

The quote is from Cashmore, restored as per the longstanding ref in the section "Bob Dylan" 3rd paragraph

/* Bob Dylan */ add detail to match quote

fix redir

/* Background */ The alpha jet was not a Lockheed aircraft.

/* Early life and background */ ref to post punc as per [[WP:CITEFOOT]]

/* top */ add see also for similar sounding word

include similar pronunciation surname as "see also"

Redir to more close match - will also add previous to DB page

/* Geology */ old link was dead

/* Human remains and grave goods */ ref to post punc as per MOS

Undid revision [[Special:Diff/1340788233|1340788233]] by [[Special:Contributions/Doniago|Doniago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) I find it bizzare that someone would revert every single edit I made I feel like the edits were more than satisfactory. THere were many factual errors, and lots of them were either misleading or in the wrong order. I would prefer if you try and come to a reasonable talk page discussion abouthtem..

/* Plot */ clarify blue lights at night and then in the daytime as well

/* Plot */ prose, cut some dross, crs

/* Plot */ fixes, prose, reorder, clarify

/* Plot */ crs, prose

/* Plot */ as per United States Navy website

/* Plot */ crs

/* Plot */ prose

/* Plot */ fixes, prose, crs (e.g. five not four survivors)

/* Plot */ crs first 2 paras

/* Plot */ clarify, corrections, prose

/* Plot */ calrify, wikify, add first use abbreviation

/* top */ post pun as per MOS

/* Captain's arrogance */ crs he tells the captain five times about ground proximity, as well as voicing concerns over incorrect procedures

/* Search and rescue */ cr: crew is generally plural

/* Life and career */ cr punc

/* Life and career */ rearrange for clarity, prose and include 2 refs

/* History */ add archive url to pdf

/* History */ add url to PDF as DOI link broken

/* History */ important to understand there are three separate companies, all subsidiaries of the Corendon Tourism Group; Corendon (Turkish), subsidiary Corendon Dutch (Dutch) and Corendon Airlines Europe (Maltese) all powned by the Turkish group.

The lead is almost longer than the article text - so definitely not too short a summary.

/* Boris Cheranovsky */ cr header

/* Chengdu */ add BICH range

/* top */ fix redirs

add born in the Ukrainian ssr

Chaosdruid moved page [[Chyeranovskii BICh-3]] to [[Chyeranovsky BICh-3]]: Misspelled: Chernosky is the one we use for the bio, [[Boris Cheranovsky]] , and the "ii" ending is an alternative USA and 1960s anglicisation

Chaosdruid moved page [[Chyeranovskii BICh-3]] to [[Chyeranovsky BICh-3]]: Misspelled: Chernosky is the one we use for the bio, [[Boris Cheranovsky]] , and the "ii" ending is an alternative USA and 1960s anglicisation

/* top */ include details in earlier sentence, wikify

/* Development */ wikify

/* Plot */ cr paras not spacing

/* Release */ moved further down to mathc others such as "examples" sections, or "photowall"

/* Plot */ move film further down to match others

/* Plot */ one para -> two

/* Controversy */ turn into a quote, as hoaxer implies there are real ones by non-humans

/* Personal life */ moved sentence from bio section

/* Biography */ move sentence

/* Biography */ prose, add refs

/* Series 2 (2026) */ fix however, prose, add small detail, significance of the driver is that he witnessed the shooting

add ref needed banner - the only one is primary from the bullring's website

/* Bullfighters */ slew is a little too close to peacocking.

/* Controversy */ add note on talk page discussion of paragraph

/* Controversy */ prose, historical instead of "as of", rem unecessary flowery ... also hide text during ongoing edits

/* Personal life */ clarify, as she did not mention the name of her spouse in that performance - just that she had got married and that she was pregnant

/* Plot */ cr punc

/* Plot */ punc, pose

/* top */ remove [[WP:OR]] - unsubstantiated claim - she had over a million and a half followers on YouTube before the role.

/* Post-war */ prose

/* Post-war */ The previous sentence describes a him serving in England, maybe best not to say "returning to England" as we were not told he was not in England. It was however, returning to civilian life after his war-time service

/* Personal life */ in order of importance

/* Costumes */ prose

/* Main characters */ Debolden as per [[MOS:BOLDFACE]]

rem unnecessary comma

/* top */ AE - BE

/* Products and endorsements */ no such thing as a "hair brand"

/* Recurring */ cr link

/* Recurring */ fix broken lis item

/* Race report */ cr

/* top */ bring HERE, take THERE ... they took him there from where they were

/* Facilities */ renamed as per FAA airport charts & ref

/* Cause */ paras

/* Cause */ move ref to after punc as per [[MOS:REFPUNC]]

/* Cause */ ref to post punc as per MOS