Wikipedia contributions by Gossamers

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*THE* founding father? The reggaeton main article doesn't even mention him

Simplifying; wording makes it sound like he played as a GK under Mou.

Simplifying. That's implicit in the preceding part of the sentence.

I think that implication is pretty obvious

The first part is simply not true, while the second part isn't an encylopedic statement.

as *THE* founding father? The reggaeton main article doesn't even mention him

Dead link

Dead link

Trying to keep it a bit more encyclopedic

Why would we have a distinguish element that leads to a dead link?

This sentence adds nothing

No one says that

League goals only

Mentioning the specifics/strategy of a single game performance in the intro is too much detail for the lead; it's discussed below in greater detail

"Widely recognized" for being controversial doesn't really make sense; plus, his controversy/divisiveness is discussed later in the intro.

Wiki style guide changed from this format

Source?

Unsourced, also that section's for athletes/models etc where height is relevant to career

Rm distinguish — surnames too different, different eras, no real risk of confusion

Rm distinguish — surnames too different, different eras, no real risk of confusion

Formatting/naming conventions

Expanded lede to include Hamza Bey’s role as Mehmed II’s envoy to Vlad III in 1462. Multiple chronicles and modern historians (e.g. Treptow, Cazacu) note he was sent as an emissary to Wallachia and executed by impalement at Târgoviște. His envoy role is historically significant and directly tied to Mehmed’s 1462 campaign, thus worth inclusion alongside his admiral title.

What?

Keep it encyclopedic

We're talking about Bellini who died in 1507, why does it say he did something in the 19th century?

Links to an unrelated term