Wikipedia contributions by Richardcavell

#REDIRECT to [[John Carmack]]

#REDIRECT to [[Punky Johnson]]

Redirect to [[Doneness]] - best target I can find right now

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Redirect to [[Honda CBF250]]

Redirect to [[Honda CB1300]]

#REDIRECT to [[Archie Mountbatten-Windsor]]

Redirect to [[C.H.S. Fifoot]]

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[List of VFL/AFL players to have scored 500 goals]]

Create redirect to [[List of VFL/AFL players to have scored 500 goals]]

Redirect to [[Marlon Brando filmography]

#REDIRECT to [[Twiggy]]

#REDIRECT to [[Michael Palin]]

This is the best target that we have at the moment

It really applies more to the Coco 1 and 2

/* Episodes */ "strict him in the well" -> "strand him in the well"

/* Debates over dating */ obvious typo "wan" -> "was"

/* Scale */ one idea per sentence

/* Development */ "to which new characters will be tied to" -> "to which new characters will be tied"

/* Episodes */ portraying Buddy Holly [[The Buddy Holly Story]] -> portraying Buddy Holly in [[The Buddy Holly Story]]

/* Nightclub owners */ The surname is "Kray", not "Krays"

#REDIRECT to [[John Carmack]]

More natural language: "a brink of war" -> "the brink of war"

/* Games */ The list items should either all have full stops or none

Break run-on sentence

"and" is a better word than "or", since all 3 things have been researched

#REDIRECT to [[Punky Johnson]]

/* Tour dates */ appears to be a typo

No evidence that this is psychogenic, and some evidence it could be traumatic. To claim that it is dissociative could imply that he is a criminal or has done something wicked.

Redirect to [[Doneness]] - best target I can find right now

"groups's" -> "group's" : No need for a plural there

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Plausible misspelling of Vyvyan Basterd. Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Redirect to [[The Young Ones (TV series)]]

Redirect to [[Honda CBF250]]

Redirect to [[Honda CB1300]]

Nominated for deletion; see [[:Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Debra McGrath]]. ([[WP:TW|TW]])

Removing prod, and taking it to discussion

/* Gameplay */ the ship comes earlier in the game than the canoe, so it makes sense to put these in chronological order

#REDIRECT to [[Archie Mountbatten-Windsor]]

Redirect to [[C.H.S. Fifoot]]

/* Wife and Concubine */ there's more than one so it should be a plural

typo "as" -> "was"

need to repeat the name of the subject there

/* Release */ "this was a sign new music forthcoming" -> "this was a sign of new music forthcoming"

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[Gold Logie Award for Most Popular Personality on Australian Television]]

Redirect to [[List of VFL/AFL players to have scored 500 goals]]

Create redirect to [[List of VFL/AFL players to have scored 500 goals]]

Redirect to [[Marlon Brando filmography]

/* Solar Impulse circumnavigation */ Eastwards->eastwards (no need for a capital there)

/* Gameplay */ grammar/typo

#REDIRECT to [[Twiggy]]

#REDIRECT to [[Michael Palin]]

/* Personal life */ Make this sound more medically correct

/* Personal life */ Change "Billionaire" to lowercase. No need for capital there.

/* Gameplay */ grammar

/* Reception */ typo : "reviwes" -> "reviews"

This is the best target that we have at the moment

fix grammar

/* Later years */ "to be served" -> "to serve" This is obviously what was meant

/* Education and early career */ typo : obtainin -> obtaining

/* Implementations */ It's most natural to say it this way

/* Culinary uses */ Beef would have to be more common

Better target -> [[Cooked rice]]

/* Ingredients */ This is the more natural way to write that

/* See also */ Remove item that has no connection with the subject

This is a sharper target I think

He was knighted in 2017

/* Series */ Remove self-link, add full stop and the fact that he might be the CEO of TapStar is not relevant here

Unlink Peter Liepa's name, since that's a self-redirect

/* Ports and remakes */ Add full stop to end of sentence

/* Gameplay */ On the C64 it's E+S

/* Gameplay */ I confirm they are definitely in the C64 version

/* Gameplay */ change comma to semicolon

redirect to [[Batman: The Caped Crusader]]

/* Super Mario Advance */ "an new" -> "a new"

possessive use of apostrophe

/* Cast */ There isn't really any such thing as a "dental doctor"

/* Private Life */ I suspect this was written when the subject was still alive

I think this is what was meant - please revert me if I'm wrong

Sharper category

Redirect to [[Marlon Brando filmography]]

Sharper category for heart transplant patients

Sharper category for heart transplant patients. Note also that he had a kidney transplant, which counts for keeping the "Organ transplant recipients" category

/* Death */ He lived for 22 years post transplant, so it's worth mentioning

He lived for 24 years after transplant - that's remarkable

No need for a capital there

Redirect to [[Hinge and Bracket]] - this was their sitcom

/* Production hardware */ "migrated... on 2013" -> "migrated... in 2013"

Adding [[Category:Heart transplant recipients]]

Removing unsourced information from this biography - 0 Google hits, his obituaries don't mention this

Removing [[:Category:Organ transplant recipients]] - He is already in sub-category [[:Category:Heart transplant recipients]]

/* Cast */ Citation needed - I think that was the name of Mugatu's collection, which Zoolander modelled

/* Gameplay */ This is slightly better

/* Liver transplants */ Add date of death for [[Jim Nabors]]

/* Preparation */ "Optionally, small amount" -> "Optionally, a small amount"

/* Awards */ Remove duplicate list item

/* Early life */ His career did not start then

/* Activism */ More concise expression

/* 2016–present: Excuse Me, Eurovision Song Contest and health issues */ "surgery" is awkward in that place

/* 2016–present: Excuse Me, Eurovision Song Contest and health issues */ no need for repeated concept

Let's not be hasty - it was an engagement only

/* United Kingdom */ let's sound like an encyclopedia

/* Family */ the one that we have an article on goes first

/* Family */ Put his siblings first, then his children

/* Family */ Past tense now

/* Stage antics */ The word "acute" does not mean "severe" and it makes no sense in this context

/* Career */ remove repeated item

/* Box office */ I think that was supposed to be something like "the North American market" but it didn't work out like that

/* Film and television */ This is more natural English, although I acknowledge that you can be "on" a land mass

This is how he is named on the cover of his book - and he does have an honorary doctorate