Wikipedia contributions by Textorus

Create article - I know it's just a stub but that's all I can do tonight.

Created article

Company names and brand names are NOT italicized.

/* See also */ Correct wikilink; alphabetical order

/* 18 May to 4 June—war cabinet crisis */ italics

/* Description and geography */ tense

/* Fire Island as a setting */ Diction

Diction

/* Subprime mortgage crisis */ Clarify

/* Civil rights */ add paragraph break - change of topic

/* Home media */ Clarify for young'uns who don't understand that VHS was a format, not a service.

/* */ Add hatnote: also. These two articles probably ought to be merged, but I'm not going there.

/* */ Add hatnote: also

/* Princess of Denmark */ Diction: Her "advances"?? You have no idea what you are saying.

/* */ Diction

/* Electoral history */ One, Two, Three . . . FOUR! Duh.

/* History */ cut wordiness

/* History */ add info per source cited

/* Origins */ {cn}, cut wordiness, other c/e

/* Final years and death */ Nix needless "etc." - if you can't name any more, just stop the sentence.

/* The beginnings, 1924–1927 */ wikilink

/* External links */ Nix meaningless phrase

/* Early years */ Per [[WP:BURDEN]], deleting unsourced claims, extraneous to the quotation

/* Critical reception */ Add year to this jealous old prick's hateful critique

/* Death */ Correction - N. B.,

Move Ancestry section to its logical place, after Arms

/* Notable inhabitants */ Diction

/* Honours */ Chronological order

/* Instruments */ Clarify per info cited earlier in this wikiarticle

/* Hobbies and other interests */ Rename subsection header - there are no hobbies mentioned here

/* Critical reception */ Correction per source cited, which gives the month and year, but does not provide a date

/* Critic */ Correction per source cited.

/* Early life and education */ comma

/* Author */ sp

/* */ Corretion

/* */ Giving plain English pronunciation is good; but you have to show where the accent is, too.

/* Early life and education */ Diction

/* External links */ Replace dead link with full-length YouTube video

/* Crash investigation and report */ There is NO NEED to avoid using the masculine pronoun for a male captain here - it's just laziness not to do so, and misquided PC.

/* Unique facilities */ move pic to right for proper display of section headers

/* In media */ Have you ever heard of *chronological order*??

/* Early career */ Clarify, cut wordiness. And what is with this "the wealthy, the wealthy" crap? Yes, wealthy people vacationed in those places - BUT so did middle-class folks and working-class. This is AMERICA, people, not Soviet Russia. If you have the money, or at least a credit card, you can fly, drive, or hitch a ride to wherever you please! I see this kind of screwy writing a lot these days. Just stop it!

/* top */ Move paragraph about the sequel to the lede - a reader shouldn't have to wade through the whole article to know this important fact.

/* Personal life */ Clarify

/* After The Liberace Show */ {cns}

/* Personal life */ sp

/* Biography */ Correcting major geographic mistake

/* Iconography */ typo

/* Politics */ .Dicton: What is a Hollywood heavyweight, exactly? Whatever the answer may be, these four are NOT all in the same category.

/* Relationship with Joan Blondell */ Diction

/* Legacy */ add subsection header

/* top */ tense

If she was born in 1855, she could NOT be 16 in 1855! Somebody's math is wrong, but I can't access the sources cited to find out.

Per [[WP:BURDEN]], deleting unsourced claims. Tensions *between the US and Vietnam" were NOT "escalating" in the 1950s when he probably joind the CG. Year is not given in this paragaraph, but the opening sentence is surely mistaken.

/* Shalako */ {unref section}

/* top */ tense

/* top */ NOT!

/* 2006 mock trial */ nix cap

/* Pinkerton investigation of the "Ala Moana" case */ my bad

/* Pinkerton investigation of the "Ala Moana" case */ Clarify

Diction

/* United States */ {cns} x 2 - what a load of unsourced claims!

/* Description */ Chopping would, and saw too; also corrections per sources cited

/* 1950 to present */ hyphen

/* 1950 to present */ my bad

/* 1950 to present */ Corrections per source cited (Smithsonian)

/* top */ clarify caption

/* History */ Clarify

/* History */ Add info, ref

/* History */ Diction

/* Specific use for passenger trains */ Nope, sorry - the Frisco never operated any trains to or from the L&N station. They had their own passenger depot off West Garden street, close to where the big locomotive is parked. See https://scholarworks.utrgv.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1047&context=mopacbrownsville

/* External links */ add category

/* Land grants */ Clarify with specific detail from source cited

Fix dead link with new URL

Why make the reader wonder?? Very few non-Floridians know where Orange County is.

/* TV and animation */ quotes, not italics

/* top */ Diction; add wikilink

/* 2000 census */ add section header; these isubsections don't belong under "2000 census"

/* Reception */ Clarify

/* 1850 census */ add new section, info, wikilinks, ref

/* Territorial Florida period */ Clarify

/* 1850 census */ Clarify

/* top */ Clarify, wikify

/* Port in the 1930s */ Correction per image files

/* Suez Express and East Coast Savannah Express */ clarify

format fix

/* In Devonport */ add date to caption per image file; {cns}

/* Terrain */ colon

/* Morocco */ wikify

/* Origin */ nix needless info

/* Origin */ cut repetition

/* History */ Correction per image file - duh.

/* Sugar Land's founding */ cut wordiness, add ref

/* History */ add logical paragraph break

/* Criteria */ move ref where it belongs

chopping would; clarify

/* 1952 */ Correction - go read the [[Christine Jorgensen]] wikiarticle.

/* Early life and education */ [dead link]; also, clarifying sentence that was obviously written by some youngster who doesn't know that the main effect of castor oil is as a laxative.

/* Protestant work ethic */ Correction of date and name; add wikilink

/* Discovery and location */ Cut needless wordiness

/* top */ Diction

/* History */ add info, ref