Wikipedia contributions by Oknazevad

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[USF Pro Championships]]

Redirect from alternate name

Logical redirect, regardless of the incompetent sock previously creating it.

[[WP:AES|←]]Created page with '# [[Whisky Advocate]] {{R from former name}}'

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Cort Guitars]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Byzantine text-type]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Douay–Rheims Bible]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Coptic Orthodox Church in North America]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Liturgy of Saint Basil]]

Redirect to company that makes the brand. Should refund the PROD, though, as it's a notable brand of bourbon that's won awards.

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Phoenix Arms#HP22 and HP25]]

Logical redirect.

Redirect to parent company

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[C&P Telephone]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[C&P Telephone]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Rytíři Kladno]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Open-wheel car]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Washington Bridge (Harlem River)]]

Likely search term, considering the ubiquity of the bumper sticker in the northeast US.

Create as redirect

Create Redirect from plausible search term.

Create redirect. Likely search term because it's the variety used in the vast majority of canned pumpkin

Restore redirect since the article has been restored.

Create as redirect. For now at least.

Create redirect from short name

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[South Brooklyn Health]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[American open-wheel car racing]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Humbucker]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Fanatics, Inc.]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Telefunken]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Minor League Baseball#Rookie]]

Redirect per [[WP:THE]]

Redirects are cheap, and this was a common short name for the place, albeit one requiring disambiguation.

Create redirect

Restore redirect with restored article.

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Sweet potato#United States]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Light & Wonder]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Brunswick Bowling & Billiards]]

Being bold and recreating this as a redirect since [[CSX Southern Region]], which was also AFD'd for the same reasons, was made a redirect in that discussion. Makes sense to just have them have the same status.

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Colonial Theatre (New York City)]]

Create redirect

In lieu of a separate article, redirect to the namesake original venue, which lists the other locations as well.

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[William Danforth Bliss]]

Logical redirect from alt name

Create redirect

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Baseball field#First base]]

Redirect to modern line

Abbreviated Japanese title

R from abbreviated title.

Create redirect using the Japanese subtitle

Create article

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Plymouth Pinelands]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Protective equipment in gridiron football]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Spectrum HoloByte]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Reefer jacket]]

Recreate redirect as the article is originally pointed to was restored as a separate article per RFD discussion. So this is a redirect form other capitalization.

Re

Create redirect

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Blue Line (CTA)#Congress branch]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[One-cushion carom]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Nine-ball]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Nine-ball]]

Redirects are cheap

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[United States Savings Bonds#Series I]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Chinese eight-ball]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Blue Line (CTA)#O'Hare branch]]

Create redirect from common nickname

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[List of alternative Dungeons & Dragons classes#4th edition]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[List of alternative Dungeons & Dragons classes#4th edition]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[List of alternative Dungeons & Dragons classes#4th edition]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[List of alternative Dungeons & Dragons classes#4th edition]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[List of alternative Dungeons & Dragons classes#4th edition]]

Better idea than deletion, redirect to the gloasaary

Logical redirect

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[The Record (North Jersey)]]

Create redirect

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Leather#Grades]]

Article exists, redirect from alternate capitalization created.

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Chevrolet Montana]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Chevrolet Montana]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Fiat Fullback]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Fiat Toro]]

Redirect brand to full company name

Create redirect, since the current generation doesn't use the SVT, having a redirect without it makes sense.

Plausible redirect based on misspelling

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Bacon#Bacon fat]]

[[WP:AES|←]]Redirected page to [[Really Useful Group#LW Theatres]]

/* Concerts */ copyedits and remove unsourced trivial entry.

costco is not mentioned at all in the sources for that sentence. Any mention of them is unsourced and must not remain. Also remove over capitalized text-book style "Company A". This is an encyclopedia [[WP:NOTTEXTBOOK|not a textbook]].

Obvious vandalism

Restored revision 1343594824 by [[Special:Contributions/Had0j|Had0j]] ([[User talk:Had0j|talk]]): Being blunt, the overhaul was very poor.

Not "most of them". ALL of them. Frankly, I don't think the overhaul of this article was particularly well done.

/* See also */ already linked

/* */ better word choice

Not really a good image

no. Predecessor is not for list g all acquired companies after this company was founded. It is only for the ones that were part of the founding

/* Bible translation */ trim duplicate entries

/* Bible translation */ not comprehensive enough, and containing a POV-pushing lineage

/* Editions after the Second Vatican Council */ link and companies are not italicized.

/* Revision following the Second Vatican Council */

/* */ grammar

/* Lutheran Churches */ nothing in that image indicates ad orientum

/* Notable Authors */entire section is promotional and catalogue like

/* History */ trim excessive promotional text. Wikipedia isn't for advertising or preaching

/* History */

/* See also */ remove entirely redundant link list

/* Design and features */ we remove inappropriate trademark symbol and promotional bit.

/* */ fix ref placement and other formatting fixes

/* */

Reorder chronologically. Remove league that had nothing to do with this league. It should have its own article, not be inappropriately crammed in here. This is about a specific league, not the entire history of pro women's softball. It is utterly OFF TOPIC! Also make the history chronological and combine championship charts, as charts do not belong in the prose section

/* */

/* Professional leagues */ oops, got that backwards. That's because the article was utterly backwards in layout and content placement. Overhauled that article for clarity.

/* Professional leagues */ Also, AFP was a one-and-done.

/* Professional leagues */ clarify the relationship between WPF, WPSP, and NPF. Also, add a paragraph break.

/* */ likewise, this is covered by the hatnote.

/* */ remove spurious mentions of non-leagues and one-and-done leagues without any similarity of name. The AUSL still exists, but it's irrelevant here.

/* */

Restored revision 1354144023 by [[Special:Contributions/Oknazevad|Oknazevad]] ([[User talk:Oknazevad|talk]]): Not improvements. Editorializing, overly excited language, essay like writing. Just not good just-the-facts writing.

/* Names and etymology */ add no wrap templates so the endings don't get orphaned to the start of the next line.

Proper section order

/* */

/* 2025 text edition */ less wordy

/* History */ remove editorializing and unsourced analysis.

/* Release */ improve flow and remove redundancies

/* Present */ unsourced and inappropriately placed

/* Release */ distinguish the European Mirrorsoft releases, which were not released by Spectrum HoloByte in the U.S.

/* */ these were the Mirrorsoft version, not the Spectrum HoloByte version.

/* Release */ the original DOS version from the Academy doesn't have music.

/* Development */ terminal punctuation is part of the quote, so goes inside

/* External links */

This is better wording. As an inanimate object, it doesn't go on its own at all. The passive voice is entirely appropriate, and grammatically alcorrect

/* Printed Bibles */

/* */

/* */ add archive link, remove incorrect tags.

/* See also */ merged here

Restored revision 1342347608 by [[Special:Contributions/Mitch Ames|Mitch Ames]] ([[User talk:Mitch Ames|talk]]): Not improvements

Restored revision 1354033274 by [[Special:Contributions/Mr.choppers|Mr.choppers]] ([[User talk:Mr.choppers|talk]]): Absolute awful changes. Clearly lacks sufficient competence in the English language.

Better word choices

"8u" is an age class. It's singular.

Restored revision 1351424074 by [[Special:Contributions/HonkShooHonkShoo|HonkShooHonkShoo]] ([[User talk:HonkShooHonkShoo|talk]]): Ungrammatical non-sequitur junk

Redundant AI drivel

The limited run special release doesn't need to be in the infobox. It can only cause confusion for the reader.

OVERLINK

Redundant phrasing. That it was the U.S. is established in the first sentence. Doesn't need to be repeated.

/* See also */

Restored revision 1314677113 by [[Special:Contributions/Ineffablebookkeeper|Ineffablebookkeeper]] ([[User talk:Ineffablebookkeeper|talk]]): Overly aggressive trimming that removed what prayers are said on the weeks and cruciform beads, rendering this incomplete.

/* Holy Communion */ missing word

Please see [[MOS:BOLD]] and [[MOS:LEAD]]

/* top */ cited in the body. [[WP:LEADCITE]] applies.

/* Reviews */ no

/* Starter Set: Heroes of the Borderlands */ further tense fixes

Reverted 1 edit by [[Special:Contributions/Anachronist|Anachronist]] ([[User talk:Anachronist|talk]]): The paragraph is about more than the flush pips, but also the rounded edges and corners. The source is fine, as it's specifically about backgammon, which is the point of the paragraph, to describe backgammon's use in particular. The removal also causes the image to spill over into the next section.

/* Season 10 and Beyond */

/* Season 10 and Beyond */ fix broken ref tags

no it isn't.

/* Legacy */ quote marks for song title

/* Aftermath */ wrong rope re Sid's broken leg.

/* New version */ fix markup

/* Old Testament */ don't need that here.

/* top */

/* Early views */ missed one

/* Early views */ dash corrections

/* Influence */ proper noun

/* New Testament */ tweak chart. I agree that including modern translations is problematic (none of the Greek editions used are just one text type) and streamline overly detailed notes and use bullet point

/* New Testament */ inappropriate use of boldface. Also, hyphen or not doesn't need to be noted. It's trivial.

/* Theopneustos */

/* Pericope Adulterae (John 7:53-8:11) */ feels like there should be a paragraph break there to emphasize the contrast with the preceding paragraphs.

/* Comma Johanneum (1 John 5:7) */

/* Colinaeus */ Fixing style/layout errors

See the foreword of the Bible itself. (See https://www.vatican.va/archive/ENG0839/__P1.HTM). "In the present edition of Genesis to Ruth there are certain new features: a general introduction to the Pentateuch, a retranslation of the text of Genesis with an introduction, cross-references, and revised textual notes, besides new and expanded exegetical notes which take into consideration the various sources or literary traditions." The cited source missed that.

/* See also */ remove redundant links

/* See also */ remove duplicate link, add predecessor translation.

Undid revision [[Special:Diff/1353474859|1353474859]] by [[Special:Contributions/Veverve|Veverve]] ([[User talk:Veverve|talk]]) That's my point. The source is wrong.

/* Completion and use */ remove redundancy

/* First edition */ That passage is inaccurate. The 1952 version of Genesis was not used for the complete NAB in 1970. It was part of the [[Confraternity Version]]. Most of the NAB OT was recycled from the CV, as it was still pretty new (the last book finished, Jeremiah, was only a year old) but not all of it was, and the translation of Genesis in the 1970 version was all new. As was the NT.

/* Revised Edition */ link

/* top */

/* Divine Worship: Daily Office */

/* Definition */ period outside of link. And no separate article, so an internal section link

/* History */ m

/* Substations */

/* Substations */ overlinking

/* Transmission system architecture */

/* Transmission system architecture */ fix image markup. Doesn't need to be so damn huge